Tuesday, 19 May 2015

Star Writers!

Last week these writers were writing about their Mums for Mother's Day. They wrote some really great sentences and remembered to use punctuation. They took their work to show Mr Vasau, who game them a Principal's sticker award. This group of writers try extremely hard to write independently and Miss Martin is so proud of their effort in writing. 

Back- Phaze, Dominic, Satriani
Front- Kaneisini, Grace, Ului


 Satriani wrote "My Mum likes to read books for me and my Mum she takes me for a walk to the pools. I love my Mum because she is pretty."

 Kaneisini wrote "My Mum makes dinner and she does the washing and she works hard. I love my Mum because my Mum is kind."

Dominic wrote "To Mum thank you for giving me a card. Thank you, Dominic. I love you Mum."

 Ului wrote "To Mum thank you Mum for cleaning with me. Thank you Mum for making my yummy lunch."

 Phaze wrote "To Mum thank you for helping me clean my room. I will listen and I love you."

Grace wrote "To Mum thank you for making cupcakes and thank you for washing the dishes Mum. I love you Mum."